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Post by LEOPOLD PHILIPPE BARATHEON on Jun 9, 2013 12:54:14 GMT -5
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MERCY
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Post by MERCY on Jun 12, 2013 11:38:21 GMT -5
you're not quite there yet... I do love him. Just a few things, I swear... -The only thing I'd be concerned with, what with him being a corrupt mage, is how he passed his Archana Iudicium. You just might want to go into a little more detail, in his history, about his time as a student or an apprentice in the tower. Considering his affinity for the arcane arts, he probably could have done away with just a short amount of time as a student or going right to apprenticeship(depending on when he and Lucille reached the tower, that is.).
-Also, how old was he when they arrived in the tower? This will help you determine what he started out as there and... I also need to know for Lucille's history. |
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Put a cap in General Gobbledigook here, my good man.
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Post by TEH on Jun 13, 2013 14:33:22 GMT -5
Simple, he didn't. I don't picture Leo as the type to tolerate a teacher, or tutor for very long. He could stay out of tower business until he is reunited with his siblings?
I feel it should be recently, I think they should've been at the tower no longer than a year. But seeing as you have three out of five, I believe it would make more to let you decide. xD
Fixed it, though.
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