RODRIK, Robert

Normally, I would put a supportive message here, telling the member that they've almost got it and there's just a few more things they need... or something else along the lines of that.  But you... you are my best friend and i have one thing to say to you... my stomach hurts and I think i'm dying.

-In Eric's application, Robert is a year and a half younger.  In this application, he's 5 years younger.  I'm not sure if I'm digging why he was kept alive and why the pack kept him.  Tying the age in with that, if you go with the age he is in Eric's app, they could have kept him because of his experience with magic and his knowledge of the tower.  If you go with his age here, they could have kept him because he was young and could easily be manipulated into following them.  I'm not really buying the "curiosity" and.... I don't even know if it makes sense when you think about it.  What was there to be curious about???  Whether or not Robert was circumcised or not?  Usefulness seems like the main reason they would keep him.  Why did the wildlings keep Jon Snow alive?  Because he was a useful crow.

-Add in something about his build under appearance... you know, describe his sexy body and nice, firm pecs... rawr.

-Lily was 5 when their father died.

-The history needs more.  I'm not quite buying it the way it is.  Maybe it's just lacking in emotion?  For instance... he seems to feel no real resentment toward the woman who "killed" his family, burned down his home, attacked him, turned him into a werewolf, and forced him to live with a pack of werewolves?  I would have murdered that woman in her sleep!  I think it's really that whole part of the history that doesn't click.  He seems too happy with the pack and it just doesn't seem dark enough.  He should resent them.  Hell, maybe he could have some ulterior motive for actually staying with them.  Although, I suspect one reason would be that he has nowhere else to go.  This pack is supposed to be a bunch of cold-hearted killers!  Make them seem it!  I'm just picturing them sitting around a fire, drinking hot tea with their pinkies up and eating eclairs and cream puffs...

-This is just a side note, but Lily's dream in our thread totally matches Robert... I mean, the multiple wolves chasing after her,like a pack?  Including the blue eyed wolf... maybe I'm the one with psychic abilities... I so saw this plot coming!  Hahaha...ha.  Okay, moving on...

-You forgot his name, up top...