Just wanted to let you know, we're going to be using a new form of character application in which you'll instead put the info into your character's profile. The info will pretty much be the same, so you'll be able to copy and paste everything. I just figured I'd let you know ahead of time so that you're not too surprised when i ask you to put all of this info into your profile. I'll let you know when this change will occur though; I'm still waiting on someone to finish the plugin to make this happen.
In the meantime though...
-Everything looks pretty good, but I'd like you to expand more on her history. It's a good history, just a little vague. Here's some points I would like to see expanded in her history:
1. You say that her mother was able to teach Ellena to control her magic. Did her mother have magical abilities? If yes, try to incorporate that. If not, where would she have learned about how to control one's powers?
2. Since she's the librarian, I'd really love to see her love and passion for books incorporated into the history. It could have stemmed from her mothers stories. Perhaps she could have spent a lot of time, among the Elendil, reading and delving into books? So long as you can stress this in some way, so that we can clearly see why she was chosen as the Tower's Librarian, you're good.
-In her history, you say "However, after Ellena had made the choice to leave the mountains, her elemental magic appeared." This is a little confusing and, while I know what you mean, others may be slightly boggled by this. Maybe you could add that this forced her to stay at the end of this sentence?
-There's a few grammar and spelling mistakes that could use fixing, though these are minor and won't determine whether or not she's accepted.
EDIT: There's a few other things I forgot to put down before:
-You say she's half Elendil and half human, but you only have down Elendil under the basics.
- You have "Nam'en En'daleth" down alongside her name, but only mention that her name is Ellena Rosewood. Where does this extra name come from? Or, if possible, could you do away with it?
-Her age... she's eighty years old, so even among the Elendil she would be a little over middle aged. Katie Mcgrath is 29... so while she's not the worst playby for her, she's still a little young looking.
BUT, seeing as she's half human, she wouldn't have the life span of an Elendil elf anyway. Her lifespan would be dependent on both of her parents' races. That being said, she would be well over middle-aged... I know, it's a little complicated. My suggestion, if you want to keep Katie Mcgrath as a playby, would be for you to make her younger. Since I don't remember if you mentioned her father's race or not in her history, here's a bit of a guideline on halfling elf ages:
ANOTHER edit(sorry): I recently adjusted the numbers I posted her for you before. You can find a better explanation of halflings
HERE.
-Another thing I didn't notice before(even though I pointed the sentence out) was that you state "her elemental magic appeared." You may want to refer back to the introduction in the magic thread.