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Post by arya grace viserys on Jul 9, 2013 21:39:19 GMT -5
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MERCY
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Post by MERCY on Jul 10, 2013 1:24:43 GMT -5
Just a few, minor things...
-Cailan isn't the archmage, he's an arcane master.
-You don't have any of her best/worst areas of magic listed. You need AT LEAST one for each.
That's about it, I think... I suppose we should talk about the scene in which their father was killed later. I had something in mind back when I first made Cailan, but I totally forget what it was, so we can come up with something together, to go along with what you've said in Arya's history.
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