Stripe,Black

Before I start looking this over, there are a few things that are in need of fixing right off the bat.

-You posted this using what you claim is your OOC account. OOC accounts are meant to be separate from character accounts. Creating a character account is simple. If you look at the bottom right corner of your screen, you'll see a few, small icons. When you roll over the icon with the people in it, you might see "Switch Account" appear. Click on that. When you do this, you should see "Select Account" with your OOC account under that. Beneath that, there are a few links. Click on "Create a new account on this forum." Then all you have to do is put in "blackstripe" or whatever username you choose for your character account. Usually it's easiest if you go with your character's first name as the username. Once that's done, it's that account which you then have to edit and post an application with.

-When you do create your character account and you go to post your application again, there is a code that you need to use. When you copy the code from the code box and paste it into a new thread, make sure you are in "BBcode" mode rather than "Preview" mode BEFORE pasting the code into the text area. You can switch modes using the tabs to the bottom left of the post input area.

-Though I haven't read over your character's bio yet, I did note that you are missing an image of your character's celebrity playby. This is needed. If you are in need of an image, you can always ask for someone here to resize one for you.

-You also posted two applications rather than one. I assume that this is a mistake, but it was once that I wanted you to be aware of, just in case.